Dr. Jamie Bondage

I was really lost in this. It was a good start...but confusing. I would suggest spacing outyour paragraphs so it's easier to read. Jamie

Ryan: I laughed. "Anything you want. I'm yours to control." I smiled and kissed her. "We can go anywhere and do anything. It's up to you."

Brian: I laughed. "Sorry. What were you saying?" I asked, turning back to Felicia. She frowned. "Who was that?" "Old girlfriend. You know how they are." I rolled my eyes ...

Aurora: I looked up at him shocked. "St...stupid?" I stammered, blushing furiously. "Sur...surely not." Breathe. I reminded myself. "I'm not worth it. and most of them are jerks."

Aurora: I blushed. "I don't have one." I said, trying to sound casual. After all, I was the one who brought it up.

Aurora: I nodded and walked out the door, down towards the beach. "Do you have a girlfriend?" I asked curiously and skeptically.

Andrew: I laughed. "Were they reluctant to part?" I smirked jokingly. Knight growled in my mind and I laughed harder. "This is Lilli. My brilliant girlfriend."

Aurora: I nodded and blushed, setting my book down. "Where to?"

Sydney: I got out of bed and dressed quickly, practically running onto the deck. "In a hurry, captain?" "Um...no, I suppose." I laughed uncomfortably. everyone was out and about. I ...

Aurora: I continued to blush. "Your sweet. extremely so. But your probably the only one who finds me intriguing." Brian: I grinned and pulled away. "Your not too bad of ...

Johnathon: I moaned. "Liz!" I gasped, wiggling underneath. "Liz! This isn't fair!" I groaned. It felt so stinkin good! I moaned again.

Ryan: I laughed. "Why would I be? I'm here with you. That's enough." I smiled and kissed her.

Aurora: I blushed. "Am I? How so?" I looked at my feet. anything to get away from his sincere gaze.

Sydney: I groaned. I didn't want him gone, but I knew he was right. I sighed and tried to go to sleep, but visions of him haunted me. I groaned ...

Sydney: I moaned loudly, hoping no one else was around to hear. I sighed in pleasure. "Julius." I breathed. I as in heaven. I couldn't think. For once in my ...